ext_1117: (arthur/merlin)
emeraldteal ([identity profile] emeraldteal.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cat_77 2009-11-06 03:03 am (UTC)

Eheheh, I read it a second time and haz additional comments. ^.^

“Of course, sorry about that,” he said with a prim British accent that may or may not have made her toes curl.

Hehe, I'm with Freya in this one. <3 (also, thanks for not calling Merlin a boy :D)

The man rose his eyes to meet her own and she swore she heard his voice, bright and clear within her own mind say,

I think you meant 'raised' his eyes here ;)

Still loving it. :D

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