It is *totally* accurate. Just found my original description of him from last year's NaNo:
The woman from the bridge laughed. “Lysa Roberts,” she said in introduction, offering out her hand, even though it was a bit awkward on the stairs. “This is Matt Foley, otherwise known as Foley One. Foley Two is his wife, Margaret, who’s still up on the bridge with Captain Mackenzie.”
“Notice how she never introduces Paulie?” AJ asked, pulling open a door to the gear area.
“That’s just because he’s an ass,” Kharynna shot back. She tucked her bag on a shelf and started stripping for the second time in less than an hour. “Privacy?” she suggested, eying the new guy. AJ had seen it all before under circumstances various and variously sundry, but she did not exactly have a reputation for showing all off. That was Miri’s, and she owned it proudly.
This year's has Miri saying: “Look, Paulie, I know we hate each other and everything, but can we put that on hold long enough for you to share that coffee with me?”
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Edited 2009-11-19 12:28 (UTC)
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why should it be wrong? if it's an accurate description, I think it's fine. :-P
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The woman from the bridge laughed. “Lysa Roberts,” she said in introduction, offering out her hand, even though it was a bit awkward on the stairs. “This is Matt Foley, otherwise known as Foley One. Foley Two is his wife, Margaret, who’s still up on the bridge with Captain Mackenzie.”
“Notice how she never introduces Paulie?” AJ asked, pulling open a door to the gear area.
“That’s just because he’s an ass,” Kharynna shot back. She tucked her bag on a shelf and started stripping for the second time in less than an hour. “Privacy?” she suggested, eying the new guy. AJ had seen it all before under circumstances various and variously sundry, but she did not exactly have a reputation for showing all off. That was Miri’s, and she owned it proudly.
This year's has Miri saying:
“Look, Paulie, I know we hate each other and everything, but can we put that on hold long enough for you to share that coffee with me?”
Edit for html fail.
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